Thursday, October 9, 2008

I am Happy Again

I am Happy Again

I am happy again,
for some discrete,
countable minutes...
.
.
.
till leaden,
of a sudden,
my weathered heart
sinks?
nay, gravitates...
into my hollow belly.
On Jupiter?
I pull up hard,
God! to stand.


Never a smile
walks far enough,
so to carve transitory crow-feet
beside my glazed eyes.

My cracking verses
fracture
splutter
unrhymed -
shards scatter,
(brittle hand-blown glass);
pearls strew,
(jerked off necklace).

That cold icy hand
wrings my heart again,
In extremis
gasping
I whimper...

He is so so deaf
Or I, so so mute!

Another merry moment
soars
on bleeding wings
to its apotheosis...

How, I miss him!

Oct 9th, '08.



I qualified as principal candidate...

2 comments:

Muse said...

my weathered heart
sinks?
nay, gravitates...
into my hollow belly.

The confusion between the two conditions of the heavy heart...only the heart knows!


Never a smile
walks far enough,
so to carve transitory crow-feet
beside my glazed eyes.

"transitory crow-feet"- Love the description :)

My cracking verses
fracture

Compound fracture!

splutter
unrhymed -
shards scatter,
(brittle hand-blown glass);
pearls strew,
(jerked off necklace).

The same, in different words and imageries. Awesome work here.

That cold icy hand
wrings my heart again,
In extremis,
gasping
I whimper...

He is so so deaf
Or I, so so mute!

Another merry moment
soars
on bleeding wings
to its apotheosis...

How, I miss him!

Perfecto!

How beautifully you describe one moment (which seems a lifetime)!

-Rini :-)

Madeeha said...

O Rini! Bless you for such kind words here on my blog...

And

How beautifully you describe one moment (which seems a lifetime)!

Well, that about summarizes it all, perfectly!